2. I got a lot of really positive feedback from my last elevator pitch. My peers thought that my idea could be successful here on the UF campus. The only advice that they offered me was to be more specific about Chomp n' Run's location and methods of advertising for it. It stood out to me that I needed to make sure that my drug store would be located in a accessible and convenient spot and that students would know about it.
3. I included plans for both of these points in my second pitch. Chomp n' Run will be located behind the HUB and Marston for a location that almost all students frequent, and advertisements will be placed in buses, where students coming from off campus will see it, and in the libraries where all students will learn about it. The store's central location will also make students very aware of its presence, particularly during the construction period.
Megan
Great job on this elevator pitch Megan!
ReplyDeleteYour intro for this pitch went very well, in that it really captures one's attention and lays out thee basis of this business venture. I think you also explained how this business would work and I appreciate your feedback on the CVS competition and how you plan to effectively market Chomp n'Run against that.
Keep up the good work!
-Angela
Hello Megan. I think you pitched a great idea. Having a drug store located on campus would be very convenient and for me, it would definitely be easier to walk to it then the new CVS. With your pitch delivery, I think you did a fantastic job on that as well. You kept it short and to the point and you didn’t trip over your words, which was something I did a lot.
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http://jent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no2.html
Hi Megan. Wow I can totally relate to your service. It is a really great idea especially on college campuses. My favorite part of your pitch was the incorporation of that immediate attention getter in the start of your pitch. I think that gave a great relatable element to bring in attention. Common I think we can all say we have dropped things in the terrible dorm bathrooms. Also I really like the central locations. Talk to SG maybe they can make something happen. Apart from that I am really impressed. I encourage you to read my blog!
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Megan great concept! I like the idea of having a drugstore on campus. When I was studying abroad in Korea, the university campus had 3 different drugstores directly on campus, and it was so convenient because everything was so far away from campus. I also loved how you explained how you would market this, which for potential investors it is something good to know. I think my only advice would be for you to relax and not to get so nervous because your idea is something that this campus can really use! Keep up the good work and feel free to check out my blog post to see mine! http://lovetravellives.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch is really good, wow!! You spoke very clearly and explained a lot of important aspects of your business which makes you sound very knowledgeable and on top of things.. just what investors like! I do like your idea as well because this is soooo true! Sometimes I don't know how people live on campus with no car because getting anywhere is such a hassle and you have to plan everything around the buses. Overall, great pitch and great idea!
Check out mine at: http://ashandpeas.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-2.html