2. Most of my feedback that I got on the 2nd elevator pitch was the same as the feedback that I had received on the 1st elevator pitch - people liked my ideas a lot but wanted me to recognize the competition of the CVS on 13th Street.
3. For this improved edition, I added in details about combatting the competition of CVS. I also gave a briefing on how I plan to advertise the business on campus. I think that I have done a good job of making my pitch short and sweet but informational.
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